This is
part two of Chuck Wendig’s Flash Fiction Challenge – 200 Words at a Time Part
Two (http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2013/11/29/flash-fiction-challenge-200-words-at-a-time-part-two/). This is a round-robin fiction writing
exercise where the first person writes 200 words, a second person takes those 200
words and adds another 200 for a total of 400, and then a third person will
take those 400 and add on another 200 of his/her own and so forth until the end
of the year. I took J.D. Fitch’s 199
words and added a total of 206 of my own.
Here is the story so far:
JDFitch:
God, how
she hated dance music. Tony blared that crap every day at work, and after four
years, she couldn’t take it anymore. Most had their I-phones or mp3’s and
earbuds to stuff in their heads. The rest of them had to suffer. Her fist
smashed the bread dough with a vengeance. One fist beat the soft, yeasty mass
over and over.
“Screw
this.” [Gloria] reached and ‘touched’ the electric plug that asshole’s antique
radio was plugged into. Sparks crackled from the outlet, the acrid smell of
burnt plastic ripped across the room.
“Judas
Priest!” The sift super rushed over and yanked the cord from the wall. “Tony,
this piece of crap is gone. You understand me? Three times in one week? Burn
it, burn your own house down, but keep it out of my bakery.” Allen rammed the
offending device into Tony’s chest before stalking off.
Gloria could not help the smile that crossed her lips. Then
common sense took over. Shit.Why did magic have to be so unpredictable? Two
years, and she still could not predict the outcomes, not like her teacher. Who
would no doubt taste the magic in the air around her.
Life sucked
chunks.
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She had to be more careful or else be caught by the
Authorities. They might taste the magic she
leaked after tweaking the radio.
Most kids were screened by preschool to see whether they had
talent – somehow Gloria had been missed.
Good thing Claudia had seen her magician’s performance at a child’s birthday
party. Everything had gone wrong that
day – instead of a rabbit, she pulled a python out of the hat. Of course, the party had been for boys, so
that went over well. But it didn’t go
over with the parents when her bra and panties had pulled out of her sleeve
along with the handkerchiefs. Not sure
how that happened.
Claudia had tasted the taint and offered to tutor her if she
promised to stop playing magician.
Gloria needed to control herself first if she wanted to
control the magic. Otherwise, some
Telemage would catch a whiff and she would be slammed into a Control
Chair. Then some Docmage would fry out
her brain section that created magic – and they weren’t too careful about what
else was around, like body functions or reasoning. She didn’t want to spend the rest of her life
drooling in the corner of a closed ward, finger-painting.
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Hi, Doreen - I just posted parts 1-4 of this at http://joannahorrocks.wordpress.com/2013/12/13/flash-fiction-challenge-week-four/
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great lead-in!
Joanna